Thursday, May 21, 2009

I Should Stop Sitting Around On My Ass Moping 55

This 55 is the third 55 that I've tried to write tonight.
This 55 is the first 55 that's light on contrived insight.
This 55 doesn't make me desire a knife right through my brain.
This 55 doesn't make me inclined to jump out in front of a train.
This 55 ... what can it ignite?

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Friday, May 15, 2009

Trivett Wingo 55

Sticks on skins
the hammer pulse of the soul
crashing hoofbeats a signal
of horsemen approaching
ratcheting backblasts
from an
infernal cannonry
impacts
of mountaintops
streaking down from the sky
rattling your chest
your ears
your teeth
your guts
cataclysmic
explosive
clattering
battering
shattering reason to shards
that scatter on wind
a krakatoa
of
rock

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Friday, May 8, 2009

Star Trek 55

If you don't love Star Trek, go see Star Trek.
If you do love Star Trek, go see Star Trek.
If you hate Star Trek, well, you probably shouldn't go see Star Trek.
Music: Terrific
McCoy: Amazing
Effects: Spectacular
Dialogue: Clever
Nit-Picks: Way too many to count, but what the hell . . . it's Star Trek.

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